if my tears could bring you back

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Thursday, 29-Jun-2006 4:02:23

If my tears could bring you back, Mommy

I'd've never let you go

If life was great and life was fine

I'd've never let you go

I'm finding it hard to sleep tonight

I'm finding it hard to eat

Life goes on, but it's a lie

You're the one I seek

If my tears could bring you back, Mommy

I'd cry a thousand tears

I'd let you hold me in your arms

And destroy all my lifelong fears

But tears won't bring you back

Somehow this has been realized

I'm still crying like they can, Mommy

I guess we can all take the time to idealize

If my tears could bring you back, Mommy

I'd cry a thousand tears

I'd let you rock me in your arms

And together erase these last seven years

Post 2 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Thursday, 29-Jun-2006 4:06:45

This is really sad. Guess we're all little kids deep down somewhere.

Post 3 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Thursday, 29-Jun-2006 4:08:42

yes, i guess we are

Post 4 by lalady (This site is so "educational") on Thursday, 29-Jun-2006 11:17:09

When I read your poem posted yesterday, I got the feeling that it too was speaking of a Mom. This one also. I feel the sorrow. s

Post 5 by lalady (This site is so "educational") on Thursday, 29-Jun-2006 11:50:33

I reread your poem from yesterday. Realized it was speaking of our silent loyal companions.

Post 6 by Colombian Coke (Veteran Zoner) on Friday, 30-Jun-2006 14:53:41

did your mom dye or somthing? I like it it too deep's

Post 7 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Saturday, 08-Jul-2006 1:07:09

Such a simple poem but reaches deep in your heart. I lost mine about the same time and the years just sort of mesh together and yet just seem like yesterday. Good poem needed a good cry smile